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Bitchy Loneliness
7-21-07

Loneliness can be a bitch
But my friends are here to help me make the switch
Between harsh reality and sweet dreams
To help me cross the streams

Without unreal friends I would have no one to talk to
No one to ask me “How are you?”
No one to care about me
No one to help me dream

Loneliness is a bitch
Lucky now I’m going to make the switch
Between sweet happy dreams and cold, cruel reality
To cross that line between eternal happiness and mortality

Goodbye my faithful imaginary friends
The ones that stayed until the very end
I shall miss you, count to lucky seven
I shall miss you, even in heaven.

No more loneliness
Only happiness
I finally found bliss
But still, dear friends you are missed

I’m not lonely anymore
I see my family on God’s golden shore
I’m not lonely anymore
I’m not lonely anymore…
©2008-2009 ~Mellierae
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Author's Comments

I wrote this poem one night feeling very lonely and home sick. I had just gotten to college and I didn't really know anyone. BTW, I'm not emo!!! At least not anymore. YAY!

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:iconbellapotter:
You wrote this on my birthday. :) I like the rhyme scheme and the general message.

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so, tell me, darling, do you wish we'd fall in love? [all the time, all the time.]---the saltwater room; owl city
:iconmellierae:
Thank you. I hope you had a good birthday! lol
:iconbellapotter:
:lol: You're welcome. Yeah, it was great. :)

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so, tell me, darling, do you wish we'd fall in love? [all the time, all the time.]---the saltwater room; owl city

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